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Oracle Dogma by GarretAJ Oracle Dogma by GarretAJ
This was my inspiration "[link]"
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First off, I think it's awesome. Just a little input.
You might increase the values in the figure, the cloak and the shadowed areas of the figure. In response to that, you might also want to increase the contrast coming from the open maw of that hideous (but awesome) centipede creature to create more.... horror? Suspense? Also, I really like the smokeyness and the blue tones that are swirling around the figure, anything that you can do to play this up would also be helpful. I can tell that you have gone for a compressed value range, which is working out very well for you, I just think a little slight increase near the figures head and face is all it really needs. Very nice insectish textures and surface reflections. Overall a very nice composition and rendering.
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ihamo Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Cool!
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Bakerdezign Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Exceptional work,even though,I can't stand Hellgrimite ,centipede like creatures,ha. very well done.
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
This painting was just for you. I was waiting for you to show up.
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Bakerdezign Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Hah ha,that's a good one.:juggle:
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SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Spectacular work! :)
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
THanks
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SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome. :)
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San-T Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Very interesting piece, grabbed my attention immediately as a thumbnail because of the colors.. I just wonder if you intended to make the creature's teeth transparent because that is how it appears with the touches of yellow on them, if so, that is quite cool and confusing at the same time.. overall, very well done!
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yes I did that on purpose.
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San-T Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Then You achieved what you've set up to do ^^
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sweet
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sweet
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keren-or Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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IdrisKhaleesi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A Brilliant piece, Perfect composition and lighting and wonderful colours, fantastic xx :glomp:
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you
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Solvernia Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Great Job on this! I love those colors.
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks
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Robertthem Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Very good :thumbsup: , I just think that there should be a little more contrast on the lower part of the picture.
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ok thanks.
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Khyrid Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Um... yes.
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T33Q Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
I think it looks really cool. The only issue I have with it is her right arm. It doesn't look like it connects to her shoulder, like it's too close to the body, If that makes any sense. :P
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GarretAJ Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I appreciate the advice. I did happen to have a model for this one, and I double checked the proportions. I assure you it's correct. She kinda had her elbow tucked behind her waist.
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T33Q Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
I assumed it was something like that but the way the cloth drapes her makes me look at it twice ^^
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